I need feedback on my sales pitches- Would you respond to this? Why or why not?
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Sounds condescending and full of oneself. Good to sell your best assets, not so good to overload text with a hoity toity “Look at me!” complex.
Determine up to five of your best selling points and work from there. You don’t need to ramble or put in a bunch of senseless nothing for filler. You’re off to a good start, but you need to tone down and edit.
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